11th September
11th September                        Eleven was the day the world changed,Searing sights and sounds no...
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Thomas -- Welcome to the Sonnet Board. I'm assuming that you're open to critique, & that you'll be critiquing the other work you find here... The poem you've got so far is of a sort we've seen a...
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Thomas,Suggest you spend some time reading other sonnets on this workshop, and on the main reference page; then start again with this one.Regards,David
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Thomas,I think Mike and David have given you excellent advice, and that you'll keep writing and posting.You have chosen a very difficult subject, about which a lot has been written. My own feeling is...
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